Saturday, March 26, 2011

Io sono triste oggi

affligy , dysoly , peiny , triste
that's how I describe it...
the wind hasn't blowing yet
but the moon already crying..
raindrop stuck in the cloud
for fear of causing another flood
or maybe can cause another tsunami..
adumbration stood there like a statue
entering authority of fresh virgin..
"u can't refuse or switch it off like that??"
its not easy as if u were blowing the flame of a match stick
but my mother's womb keep on screaming
"ma peddih..ma peddih..ulu' ku"
then...lights off, shuts the door..
lock the room..
ends of the story...

"wewen's voice"

2 comments:

  1. Whoa... This is something different but it is quite fascinating! Pencampuran beberapa bahasa yang berbeza tu menarik tapikan kelemahan dia ialah mesej yang kau nak sampaikan tu jadi tak konsisten. Jalan cerita dah ada tapi dia punya plot tu macam tak cukup berkait. Kau ada bakat lah Ida jadi kena banyak menulis lagi supaya dapat cuba teknik menulis yang berbeza! :D

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  2. thnx sangat2 alif.. :) i'll do better next time..

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